WK7: Contenders: Blue Bayou 4-2 vs. Twodrop 4-2 - Blue Bayou WINS!!

[Bongo Bear]

Originally Posted by Twodrop

16@Blue Bayou

YO,

Knife tucked when I stroll ya block. License to carry if it gets loud
If u feeling froggy take half off a vet nigga - that's a military discount

Starting off great. Nice punch. Wording is iffy but that could just be me nitpicking. I still don't think it took that much away from the actual punch though.

In the gym since ur proposal. Still fat now wifey can't take the shit
Ur bride said she'd need MOAB's...& that bomb ended the relationship

Pretty funny.

No1 cares bout' ya mid-life crisis. Ask 'my little friend' for advice..
Couple shots'll put ur mind to rest it's Ballistic therapy for a price

This was light to me. Although it was cohesive I felt like it broke the momentum of the verse.

Bitch a freak n give the best head. Got pics but why this jerk wanna test it
One message could put Blue back on the market like Heisenberg resurrected

I like the concept, I wouldn't call it a reach but, I guess I don't understand what you mean but putting Blue back on the market. I still felt like it was a nice punch regardless.

Chris Kyle w/ the rifle or grab the pump to make this nerd fly
Give a fuck what he's tripping on...the BANG will open up his third eye

Felt like referencing Chris Kyle was just for the sake of multi's which is fine; I think that part could've been improved on. I do like the third eye part though. It was light to me.

Just got married to the only girl that would put up w/ ur laziness
If she's feeling a little Blue - it's becuase she has to deal with ur baby dick

Personally, this was my favorite personal I've read on the site since I've been here. I like this.

Zero contribution to any league. I'd rather have Joe Boston back
So I don't want to hear anyy 'lip faggot'... When u just lost to that
Not above politics. I'll take an ez win while ya'll stroke this geek
BET I won't @Incredible for the DQ.. If I don't see 3 Blue votes this week

This is ok.

didn't know who you were so i went back & woooow..


strapped like a backpack? a buoyancy bar? shit is haunting me yo..
mother'fucker u were a De-feat line away from me not even wanting to show

Good.

weak drop after weak drop proves that u suck w/ the flows..
been such a Rough Dispatch for you lately ur about to drive a truck off the road

I'm not really feeling this. It was light at best.

it's sad really, w/ every drop the stock of this bitch it just plummets..
tries Asbestos he can but any exposure to'em only leaves us sick to our stomachs

This is ok, felt like wording would've went a long way for making this hit harder.

who have u beaten?! names prove i'll take this win to the bank..
shit Lenses prolly the biggest & i need hi-tech Glasses to even see him in the ranks

Like I said, wording would've helped this alot. That being said I felt from here you started to pick up the pace. This line was good.

filmed me fuckin ya bitch so hard a pull in my hammy was felt..
& now we're scared of prosecution, cuz we 'Shot XXX' in a Car in Miami as well

I like this, Only thing I would nitpick on is the wording. Specifically on the multi's

she BEGGED for the dick so i beat that pussy up for four days..
no BA but you can still be an Ice Cream Champ.. u got one hell of a Sore-Bae

Solid

hasta la vista if he decides he wanna cop gats n brawl..
i got Shotgun Offense, buck shots at his Spine til there's no DropBack at all

Didn't like this part that much. It was decent but, the reference and the punch was too far apart for it to really connect.

wet em up while he’s on a date with a pump in his hood..
the Long-Nose’ll send his Bird Flyin.. then Tucan get dumped in the Woods

A decent way to wrap it up, nice punch

My vote had a more consistent verse. Funny, creative, and overall was able to take it because of that. Both battlers did a decent job. This was a interesting read. Thanks.
v/TwoDrop