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sral · 06-07-2018, 05:00 PM

Posted at: UrbanProwlers

"Phantom Thread" (2018)

"When I've gone back to work, it's always with that sense of inevitability. That may be a complete delusion, but it's the one that I need to get out of bed and go about my business. That sense that I can't avoid this thing. I better just get on with it. " - Daniel Day Lewis

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I'll strike when the iron's hot when writing this dialogue
Like lighting a fire off of dry weeds and pyre rocks
It's providing the final spark of ideas archived as art
Finish what I start, my journey's a learning tree now I embark...

This kid rose from skid row, you only leave remarks
I'll get those streets re-tarred if YOU'RE the streets, retard
I'm underground with a bone to pick like cotton farms
Thought I saw a fossil arm but it was a false alarm
Seems my delivery's off but don't get me wrong...
My final song is a timeless bomb inside an empty swan
Direct y'all mindless speech because I cause scenes
But I dont know how I re-spawned for the life of me
You rhyme hot? Please, you guys drop memes
Tongue tied on screen like that dumb Tide pod thing
Spill your guts but can't heal the cuts they grew to be
If there will be blood I will just hide in Plainview it seems
This ain't the phantom thread where Daniel Day Lewis leaves
Cuz you reap what you sew in a tight knit community
Tighten it with impunity, I'm betting you can't breathe
If you circle around my necks drop that's noose to me
You'll die alone with no dial tone,this is not Scream
Y'all dead men walking like headless zombies in Ichabod's dreams
Can't get the skinny on me, check my body of work
If you ever flipped this on me it's probably inverse
I could care less if I'm a little short sighted nerd
Hard to find binoculars as far as I'm concerned
I turnstiles fast, was into rock then found rap
Now like a concert bouncers task, I got this down pat
I can extract DNA from ghosts and package it
But if human beings factor in, the monkey genome is accurate
Free roam like Maximus, the key to life we know is Lazarus
So if the window of opportunity is closed then shatter it
I won't prevail with facts I just state opinions kid
But I can scale it back if you want to weigh in on this
I crave big tits and a fat ass to bang
So I keep one fed ex like it's Cast Away
That's some heavy shit, avoid the late toilet spray
I'll coin a phrase and employ the state of Detroit today
Can't stand to date, go out on a limb with a bandaged leg
Don't gotta amputate to feel phantom pain
You'll never see me walk away on a hobbled peg
Must have been my doppelganger that was gone for days
I brought the gang, yeah the whole shebang, record the rape
I'm the modern Norman Bates on The First 48
Write when inspiration strikes and ignore the date
Throw in the towel if you can't support the wait, Daniel Cormier
Struck by hurricanes you find yourself in dire straits
You can rain on my parade but I'm the wiper blades
I hibernate in cyberspace, awake with violence for days
I'll take this forum by storm drains like IT's foreplay
It's like a family portrait the way you forfeit...
Into the frame, but torn edges remain important
Fortunate to say the lease, you'll be paying more rent
Or locked in a mortgage 'til you lay in a morgue dead
A self absorbed waterfall never goes off the edge
I toss in bed and thoughts embed, guess I forgot the rest
A far cry from my silhouette now my pillow's wet
There's still no death worse than when we feel regret
So if I get one chance then I can build the rest
My statue on a hill suggests that I'm STILL the best
Can't avoid my phantom thread, I ghostwrite with a poison pen
Poised to foil your plans so you don't spoil the end
Your boys and ya fam won't beat this drunk geek
I'll serve you in the pub G, bring your circle down to nothing
Too proud for bluffing, no lady luck plays into love
You want bang for your buck then pay for a slut
Take a bunch of arrows mid air and shoot it in her
Speaking on what Cupid delivers makes her two lips quiver
Skin burns sweatin' bullets, I might mimic and school kids
Like Nikolas Cruz with the white supremacist movement
Select groups rhyme online and even fewer try
It's do or die like suicide hotlines keeping you alive
So if you decide to phone it in then most will arrive...
At the same conclusion as 'mines' driven over roadside
I invent a line and vent it wide, hope the vents align
It's like a participant ribbon, in any event I tried...

I'll strike when the iron's hot when writing this dialogue
Like lighting a fire off of dry weeds and pyre rocks
It's providing the final spark of ideas archived as art
Finish what I start, my journey's a learning tree now I embark...

06-07-2018, 05:00 PM	#1
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	Universe Posted at: UrbanProwlers "Phantom Thread" (2018) "When I've gone back to work, it's always with that sense of inevitability. That may be a complete delusion, but it's the one that I need to get out of bed and go about my business. That sense that I can't avoid this thing. I better just get on with it. " - Daniel Day Lewis ...... I'll strike when the iron's hot when writing this dialogue Like lighting a fire off of dry weeds and pyre rocks It's providing the final spark of ideas archived as art Finish what I start, my journey's a learning tree now I embark... This kid rose from skid row, you only leave remarks I'll get those streets re-tarred if YOU'RE the streets, retard I'm underground with a bone to pick like cotton farms Thought I saw a fossil arm but it was a false alarm Seems my delivery's off but don't get me wrong... My final song is a timeless bomb inside an empty swan Direct y'all mindless speech because I cause scenes But I dont know how I re-spawned for the life of me You rhyme hot? Please, you guys drop memes Tongue tied on screen like that dumb Tide pod thing Spill your guts but can't heal the cuts they grew to be If there will be blood I will just hide in Plainview it seems This ain't the phantom thread where Daniel Day Lewis leaves Cuz you reap what you sew in a tight knit community Tighten it with impunity, I'm betting you can't breathe If you circle around my necks drop that's noose to me You'll die alone with no dial tone,this is not Scream Y'all dead men walking like headless zombies in Ichabod's dreams Can't get the skinny on me, check my body of work If you ever flipped this on me it's probably inverse I could care less if I'm a little short sighted nerd Hard to find binoculars as far as I'm concerned I turnstiles fast, was into rock then found rap Now like a concert bouncers task, I got this down pat I can extract DNA from ghosts and package it But if human beings factor in, the monkey genome is accurate Free roam like Maximus, the key to life we know is Lazarus So if the window of opportunity is closed then shatter it I won't prevail with facts I just state opinions kid But I can scale it back if you want to weigh in on this I crave big tits and a fat ass to bang So I keep one fed ex like it's Cast Away That's some heavy shit, avoid the late toilet spray I'll coin a phrase and employ the state of Detroit today Can't stand to date, go out on a limb with a bandaged leg Don't gotta amputate to feel phantom pain You'll never see me walk away on a hobbled peg Must have been my doppelganger that was gone for days I brought the gang, yeah the whole shebang, record the rape I'm the modern Norman Bates on The First 48 Write when inspiration strikes and ignore the date Throw in the towel if you can't support the wait, Daniel Cormier Struck by hurricanes you find yourself in dire straits You can rain on my parade but I'm the wiper blades I hibernate in cyberspace, awake with violence for days I'll take this forum by storm drains like IT's foreplay It's like a family portrait the way you forfeit... Into the frame, but torn edges remain important Fortunate to say the lease, you'll be paying more rent Or locked in a mortgage 'til you lay in a morgue dead A self absorbed waterfall never goes off the edge I toss in bed and thoughts embed, guess I forgot the rest A far cry from my silhouette now my pillow's wet There's still no death worse than when we feel regret So if I get one chance then I can build the rest My statue on a hill suggests that I'm STILL the best Can't avoid my phantom thread, I ghostwrite with a poison pen Poised to foil your plans so you don't spoil the end Your boys and ya fam won't beat this drunk geek I'll serve you in the pub G, bring your circle down to nothing Too proud for bluffing, no lady luck plays into love You want bang for your buck then pay for a slut Take a bunch of arrows mid air and shoot it in her Speaking on what Cupid delivers makes her two lips quiver Skin burns sweatin' bullets, I might mimic and school kids Like Nikolas Cruz with the white supremacist movement Select groups rhyme online and even fewer try It's do or die like suicide hotlines keeping you alive So if you decide to phone it in then most will arrive... At the same conclusion as 'mines' driven over roadside I invent a line and vent it wide, hope the vents align It's like a participant ribbon, in any event I tried... I'll strike when the iron's hot when writing this dialogue Like lighting a fire off of dry weeds and pyre rocks It's providing the final spark of ideas archived as art Finish what I start, my journey's a learning tree now I embark... __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)