04-16-2018, 07:52 PM | #24 |
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i think you stopped right where you begun to hit your flow state. it seemed that way to me at least.
your section on staying faithful to your woman was interestingly phrased, lots of cool visuals and self reflective processes going on here. airs winter / hairs thinner might have been my favorite little section. for some odd reason. if 3 insane people speak with one another they are the baseline of sanity. as the old trope goes. i'd like to revisit this and break it down a bit. i'm gonna sit with it for a while now. thanks
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