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Old 03-15-2018, 07:01 PM   #1
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All Aboard





It was rainy and wet as I wept at the station awaiting a train
To take me to Texas; impatiently pacing like leopards in cages
At circus occasions, my granny was sick & the nurses were saying
They needed a kidney to urgently save her! Emergency prayers
From the clergy at church, at First Mary Hall, where Big Mama worked
As she served as a clerk ... maintaining their records for 33 years
Was worried and feared she'd pass on the gurney as surgery neared
Was nervous and scared cos the verdict's unclear if I'll make it in time
Or burn in despair!?! Fermented tears full of burbon and beers
Cos I cracked opened bottles with pearly veneers, before I arrived
To deal with the fear: the thought of her dying ... not having her here
More than can bear, it'd be more than just bad, to wake up one morning
And know that she's dead, so morbid and sad, still mourning my dad
"Morgan...be back" was the last thing he said ... before he collapsed
On the hospital bed; autopsy read: "...man mortally wounded in motorist crash"
Remortgaged the pad, cos the mortician's tab, was more than we had
Cos a shortage of cash was always an issue! "Daddy, I miss you ...
& wish I was with you ... as long as I live I'll never forget you"

I said in my head ... soul fractured in fractions like fragmented glass!

"So tragic and sad ... your miserable life. It's pitiful, right?
You're taught to believe in some miracle, Christ! Hysterical, hype!
I'm Barington Write, 'The Baron of Death & Burial Rites'
Your chariot ride is soon to arrive, driven by Charon 'The Spiritual Guide'"

"The Ferryman?"

"Aye!"

"You're scary, man. Bye."

"You married the night and it came at a price. I spared you a life
Now it's time to comply. A deal is a deal"
, he swiftly replied
Nefarious eyes and sinister grin: a midget and menace
Whose business was sin! Like Rumpelstillskin. "Remember this pen?
You signed on the line so that grandma could live!"
The station went dim
& filled with a mist as images flickered I witnessed events -- the things that I did
My life in a glimpse! As quick as it ended reality hit! I died on the date
A year to this day, but didn't remember cos limbo replays indefinite loops
As I waited for trains to catch the caboose & take me to Heaven or Hell if it's true!

... CHOO CHOO ...



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