"Like Father Like Son

Concrete · 03-15-2018, 03:54 PM

Pretty slick intro\flex piece here, pretty heavy rhyming in the first segment. There's a fine line between natural rhymes and forced rhymes to carry the theme. I think you pulled it off for this shorter piece. Switchin it up on the second segment, seems more focused around content, perhaps why I liked it better. As usual, pretty grimey and agggressive all around. Nice to see some LA-exiles back in action, I've recently started posting on this site myself.

03-15-2018, 03:54 PM	#2
Concrete Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Oslo Posts: 179 Battle Record: 5-0 Rep Power: 2158978	Pretty slick intro\flex piece here, pretty heavy rhyming in the first segment. There's a fine line between natural rhymes and forced rhymes to carry the theme. I think you pulled it off for this shorter piece. Switchin it up on the second segment, seems more focused around content, perhaps why I liked it better. As usual, pretty grimey and agggressive all around. Nice to see some LA-exiles back in action, I've recently started posting on this site myself.