Week 9: Predictions/Chat

Ghost1 · 02-07-2018, 09:58 AM

right...you guys have sortve created this wordplay bias imho...especially broke coming over here with his voting antics lol....its like a line was drawn in the sand

as far as the latter portion of your comment I disagree....but I can see both sides to it.....personally I feel like if you cant get your point across coherently IMMEDIATELY upon first read than impact suffers first and foremost......if im reading the verse I want it to read smooth...quick....harsh...if I got to stop reading....google a word read the definition then come back to the verse read the bar again and piece together your attempt it just completely sucks any fluidity you may have had initially out of the verse and hurts the effectiveness of the punch......ALSO people barely want to vote at all....if they find themselves having to do EXTRA footwork just to get a vote in its even more discouraging

as a writer its YOUR job to get your point across as coherent and succinctly as possible...youre an artist.....you cant paint a picture and then tell your audience its their fault they cant see the picture that you intended to paint.......

02-07-2018, 09:58 AM	#11
Ghost1 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 26,334 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 84181445	right...you guys have sortve created this wordplay bias imho...especially broke coming over here with his voting antics lol....its like a line was drawn in the sand as far as the latter portion of your comment I disagree....but I can see both sides to it.....personally I feel like if you cant get your point across coherently IMMEDIATELY upon first read than impact suffers first and foremost......if im reading the verse I want it to read smooth...quick....harsh...if I got to stop reading....google a word read the definition then come back to the verse read the bar again and piece together your attempt it just completely sucks any fluidity you may have had initially out of the verse and hurts the effectiveness of the punch......ALSO people barely want to vote at all....if they find themselves having to do EXTRA footwork just to get a vote in its even more discouraging as a writer its YOUR job to get your point across as coherent and succinctly as possible...youre an artist.....you cant paint a picture and then tell your audience its their fault they cant see the picture that you intended to paint.......