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10-07-2017, 12:45 AM
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little bit of rough terrain with some of the lines for ullr, not sure if he knows what usunder means either, some lines missed, forced, no rhymes, etc. but... better than ness, though if ness had held the feel of the first four lines for the entire piece (even if it were as short) it would have had my vote.
mvgt ullr |
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