Aye.. look

Final Boss · 12-20-2016, 06:29 AM

Came from the bottom, still hang where I started at
chasing the same dreams that Meek Mill already had

It's so close that I can taste the shit
Gotta focus, practice patients it's....
Hard to do when you know that you could snap on any occasion.
If I live it then I write it, Never had to fake a bit
One punch'll lean your shit back like the matrix did.
I'm Dennis the menace, you Mr Wilson how you hate the kid
Choke on the haters tighter than a Kurt Angle ankle grip
quick to spit a sweet 16, bring out the cake and gifts
S'nothin for me to slide down on you, you think I'm Saint nick
Can't teach an old dog new tricks, still wit the same bitch
Boi you all bark no bite, don't make alotta sense

I'm cannabis off a gram of stiff, giving u the most fancy of lines..
...like a cocaine binge ona China dish

Wassup guys lmk what u think what can I improve. It's hard to translate flow into words help

12-20-2016, 06:29 AM	#1
Final Boss Till The World Blow Join Date: Dec 2016 Posts: 46 Rep Power: 2709671	Aye.. look Came from the bottom, still hang where I started at chasing the same dreams that Meek Mill already had It's so close that I can taste the shit Gotta focus, practice patients it's.... Hard to do when you know that you could snap on any occasion. If I live it then I write it, Never had to fake a bit One punch'll lean your shit back like the matrix did. I'm Dennis the menace, you Mr Wilson how you hate the kid Choke on the haters tighter than a Kurt Angle ankle grip quick to spit a sweet 16, bring out the cake and gifts S'nothin for me to slide down on you, you think I'm Saint nick Can't teach an old dog new tricks, still wit the same bitch Boi you all bark no bite, don't make alotta sense I'm cannabis off a gram of stiff, giving u the most fancy of lines.. ...like a cocaine binge ona China dish Wassup guys lmk what u think what can I improve. It's hard to translate flow into words help