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09-13-2016, 04:16 PM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
Join Date: Jun 2014
Posts: 666
Battle Record: 3-3
Rep Power: 662201   |
Chem... smooth written bars..read nice.. rhyming word in my mind shoulda been changed to rhyme flawless but still worked... good flip
Slech... another wrestler punch i see... problem i have is the wanna be...not about.... when tajiri is known for that...shoulda said without that green..mist... an set up woulda been better naming all green things... Slech was more complex...juz seemed to rough... Chem was a decent direct hit... well written Vote... Chemical man |
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