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Old 06-26-2016, 05:32 PM   #13
Otto Peighlaught
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The thing that sticks out to me is the self-deprecation. It adds a level of darkness to the tone that really sets it apart. It sounds, to me, like this is your twisted view of "the chase." Locations, the aphrodisiacs involved, communicative nuances, and other elements of searching for love were painted with colorful language and brooding descriptors. Very well written. Thank you.,
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