Week 14 CHAMPIONSHIP: (c)Artifice (9-2) vs Adonis (6-5) [ARTIFICE WINS]

UnbornBuddha · 06-09-2016, 06:07 PM

Artifice took the straightforward approach, zeroing in to the perspective relayed from an eye. I enjoyed it very much, it had some visually impactful images, I guess that was the aim. I could tell some lines were not as thoughtful as others and that you spend less time trying to craft the perfect piece, nevertheless what you did create was excellent nevertheless.

Adonis:I like the second stanza much more than first one. It was just more captivating. The way the man died was morbid. And I understood how you interpreted the topic, albeit you expanded more in the sense of interpretation.

I have to say I am leaning more towards Artifice here. I felt his whole piece was more poignant and had more impact on me.

06-09-2016, 06:07 PM	#5
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	Artifice took the straightforward approach, zeroing in to the perspective relayed from an eye. I enjoyed it very much, it had some visually impactful images, I guess that was the aim. I could tell some lines were not as thoughtful as others and that you spend less time trying to craft the perfect piece, nevertheless what you did create was excellent nevertheless. Adonis:I like the second stanza much more than first one. It was just more captivating. The way the man died was morbid. And I understood how you interpreted the topic, albeit you expanded more in the sense of interpretation. I have to say I am leaning more towards Artifice here. I felt his whole piece was more poignant and had more impact on me.