Week 10: Jesodist vs Witty [JESODIST WINS 6-2]

[Inno]

Witty this had potential bro to bad you deleted yoir piece i havent read pne pf yours in a while.


Jesodist

Yeah bro this was ok. Tbh i dont know what to think of it. You gave me so many scenes packed into each line i dont know which one is the main focus. Your saying so mich bit at the same time nothing at all. One line urked me. And tbh i shouldn't be one to take, ask around lol....but

This calls for the Meticulous Slayers of the most Conspicuous Players,

None of that really made sense. To much rhyming bruh, and on top of that. Did you mean to use slayers just to rhyme with players? Cuz i feel like SLAYING OF THE MOST. Makes a lot more sense.

Dunno just my opinion bruh.

Vote. Jesodist because wittys verse is clearly a no show verse.