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04-27-2016, 06:11 PM
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Master of Beastiality
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: Lansing, Mi
Posts: 368
Battle Record: 4-6
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Sym, nice story, couple weird wordings threw me off, as well as the Spanish bits, probably would've came across cleaner as audio to me
Pat, as usual, good story, solid rhymes, I liked the sorta jazzy odd timing of the rhyme pattern Vote Asylum |
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