Week 2: Sral vs. Jesodist (SRAL WINS SHUTOUT 8-0)

timeless · 03-14-2016, 01:16 AM

Jesodist. I just feel like u and GC work at a some church u guys grew up in reading scriptures and shit but you're both twisted as fuck exploring wild mythical dreams of sorts. This verse was definitely better than your last and more whole in general. I generally thought it completely fell of once page 2 started. You just seemed more natural on the first part.

Baron. If this is actual real shit then congrats bro. I'm not in discussion too often I feel like you would've announced the news. But either way this piece was dope. It had a lack of a story/direction. I feel you could've done more with it. But so if this is real shit then it's all gravy.

V. Lars for the truth.

03-14-2016, 01:16 AM	#7
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,623 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341329	Jesodist. I just feel like u and GC work at a some church u guys grew up in reading scriptures and shit but you're both twisted as fuck exploring wild mythical dreams of sorts. This verse was definitely better than your last and more whole in general. I generally thought it completely fell of once page 2 started. You just seemed more natural on the first part. Baron. If this is actual real shit then congrats bro. I'm not in discussion too often I feel like you would've announced the news. But either way this piece was dope. It had a lack of a story/direction. I feel you could've done more with it. But so if this is real shit then it's all gravy. V. Lars for the truth.