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Old 01-14-2016, 03:07 PM   #1
MadVerbs
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Default Letter To My Moms

I was coolin in cribs while you were slavin them hours,
..was droolin on bibs & you never caved in or coward.
When in need of ah lift, you gave them with power..
ah seed to ah kid, no kid now but I'm makin this tower!
Tryna make mother proud, cause she slowed up her act
& dealt with other crowds to put clothes on my back.
I love her now as much as I did in tha past,
from rougher ground to livin in laughs.
So, for every moment ya spent in ya zone for ya cents,
I'll give back wit ah big pad.. make it ya home with no rent!
That's tha least I could do, cause..
Through all tha pain & tha hurt, you barely complained 'bout ya work..
everyday was tha same, you'd slave for tha first.
To pay bills for our place, & place meals on our plate..
so before I let you down I'll put my skills on ah page.
Get ah deal, hit tha stage.. better my wrongs as ah kid
& mom I know you're as strong as it gets but still I'm amazed.
Cause see, there ain't ah person alive I look at tha same.
You were first in my sight, gave me looks & ah name.
There were times I'd be hurtin at night.. uncertain, in fright
but you'd b workin tha fight that never worsened, it died.
I mean, you gave me advice before I needed your thoughts..
now I know it plays in tha role of leading your spot.
So believe it or not, you taught right from wrongs
& how to exceed to tha top.. though tha flight is long
I'll succeed & won't stop until I'm weak & I drop.
These are things that I say, so it's ah fact that ukno.
So, I hope that you've heard.. & get that I owe you tha earth.
I know it's not much, but I wrote you some words to show you your worth.

Letter To My Moms.
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