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05-05-2013, 05:03 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
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Battle Record: 17-32
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It was ok at best, nothing spectacular but the read was cool enough nonetheless. Felt it fell off towards the end and I couldn't really get the closure to flow well in my head. It's as if you just said ''fuck it, I'll just end this shit right here without doing anything to it..'' Decent for a vent-verse but all-in-all I'd like to see more personally.
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