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Old 08-27-2015, 06:05 PM   #8
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dope battle.

at first read, i felt clut deserved my vote because of his use of the topic, whereas it looks as if nigma wrote this verse before this week and decided to use it now. couldnt find your connection to the topic at all my dude. However, as far as writing and enjoyment out of each verse goes, I have to give this to nigma. I really appreciate cluts dialogue use, I myself have went that route numerous times and it is not an approach that is easy, let alone "respected" by other topical heads, it always got the reader lost somehow. But i enjoyed it, flowed/read smooth, etc. Nigma started out slow, but his multis and overall context really excelled as the piece went on and I didn't want to stop reading. Tough vote all around still tbh, but I feel if buck had more time to evolve on his approach, he wouldve had this.

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