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08-21-2015, 02:30 PM
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Voting from phone. Rak had some weirdly forced phrasing. Ydk's felt basic and uncreative. Neither wowed with the approach to the topic. YDKs ending felt cheap, a joke throwaway line that, instead of turning the verse on its head, just cheapened any effect. I think I enjoyed rakantors effort a bit more, which is the only basis I can use in this particular battle.
Rak
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