3. Tic vs 14. Unfukwitable - UNFUK WINS

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Original? nah, He'll receive punches since he's a dork & he seems frail,
He'll be a Rolex Replica; Once hands touch Tic in the face & Knockoff every detail.
^okay. seen the tic/clock concept a lot tho
Step back or Rockets 'll shoot, I'm use to carvin niggas up;
Bullets sizzle guts, he'll be cooking after the shots like Harden in the clutch.
^had to look it up, but it's okay
This Outsider mascot is Drake soft, I throw slugs, he can catch it,
everyone In Outlet 'em believe he's Charged up, I'm here to Pull the plug on this faggot.
^solid word connections. decent
That RB loss was like Dance Revolution, u got cooked cause ur stuff is weak;
He tried going toe to toe with Aero's and still looked like a fuckin geek.
^nice
U lack personals, I'm a savage with wits, thats here to unravel u're scripts,
He plans to show up w/ Crack Filler?, I plan to bury 'em in a wall, then Spackle the shit!
^never seen this before, but it might be played. giving u the benefit of the doubt. solid closer

vs.

We know you’re from Africa, you a Beast? Well I’m leavin you stuffed, animal
Nickname Congo – Not because you’re Black, cuz I’m constantly beatin the fuck outta you
^overworded. good concept tho
You have one solid win lately. Besides that, your progress shows reduction
Success Hinges on Making Moves - & you’re a crash victim w/ loss of all motor function
^okayyy. kinda overworded again
Suicide Squad? Sound like a Terrorist group, this kid is a shame
Close range shotty Explode On Ya Chest and really have you livin the name
^eh, seen better suicide squad flips already
Ya Punches are weak & lite. “Up & coming?” Don’t believe the hype…
Listen. Your Knuckle crack & bleed - Mine the type to make Karaoke leave the sight
^lol nice. *site tho
This dude doesn’t live it. I’m nice w/ arms, provin ya timid
When I cock it back & let the Four-Banger go..it’ll sound like I blew up a Civic
^cool concept again, but kinda overworded. focus on the four-banger wp and make that work both ways. still dcent tho

i have unfuk with the upset here. he had some clean hits (aero toe to toe was lotb imo) and his unquotes were still decent. tic had the knuckle line i thought was good and then some lines that had problems. i think it's closer than the votes might show, because tic had a lot of dope concepts that just weren't worded as effectively as they cud've been. the wording wasn't even that bad, it just wasn't streamlined and concise enough to be effective and impactful. good battle tho. props
v/unfuk