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Old 08-01-2015, 11:19 PM   #6
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Vulgar - Sounded like a love letter to me bro so I enjoyed the concept. Not as heavy handed with the scheme and placement as I've grown acustomed of you, but as a whole, the verse was enjoyed. I feel like this lacked many fine points however. You breezed over many potential details with swiftness. As I said, it was enjoyed, just not the same Vulgar



Snoop - I took this as a man going to hell. You explained a few bits of burning and why one could end up in hell early on, then changed up to the marriage. Which I can not connect to my hell theory so I assume I'm wrong. Nope, it was about demons from hell taking over Earth. That's what I got anyways. Not sure how I feel about the rhymes. The structure was cool and you executed nicely, that abab pattern. However the writers voice just came off as week. I can compare you to Ludacris here. So talented and spot on that it just comes off as cheap, but in reality he just knows what he's doing and executes

This is a tough vote although to me, one was better given pure content alone. While Vulgar dropped something to be enjoyed, deciphering a verse is half the fun for me. So while I took V's at face value I enjoyed picking through snoop's verse over and over again picking up tidbits toward my final conclusion or interpretation of his verse.

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