AOWL Week 10: Vulgar (2-0) VS. TopicalDood5 (4-0) [VULGAR WINS, 7-3.]

Dove Dozer · 04-26-2013, 11:07 AM

Vulgar - im loving the flow on this. Reading it was enjoyable cause i could vibe with it. A nice constant stream of thought on this. Nice vocab, it painted a vivid picture. So props for that. Your piece was pretty smooth all the way through. I enjoyed it. Using a lot of metaphors was a nice touch

Topicaldude - also a very nice piece of work here. Your mechanics were also very nice on this and you had so many quotables on this as well. I like how you had a little jump forward in time and kept things so relevant. Props on this as well.

A very hard battle to decide a winner on. Cause they both wrote so well.

Im voting for topicaldude though.

Amazing battle - very tough to pick a winnerr

Sorry vote is so sparse.. im on my phone.

04-26-2013, 11:07 AM	#20
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	Vulgar - im loving the flow on this. Reading it was enjoyable cause i could vibe with it. A nice constant stream of thought on this. Nice vocab, it painted a vivid picture. So props for that. Your piece was pretty smooth all the way through. I enjoyed it. Using a lot of metaphors was a nice touch Topicaldude - also a very nice piece of work here. Your mechanics were also very nice on this and you had so many quotables on this as well. I like how you had a little jump forward in time and kept things so relevant. Props on this as well. A very hard battle to decide a winner on. Cause they both wrote so well. Im voting for topicaldude though. Amazing battle - very tough to pick a winnerr Sorry vote is so sparse.. im on my phone. __________________