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Old 06-26-2015, 01:48 AM   #1
Mr. J
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The satellite dish emits hope on a candlelit wish..
I'm frantic, demanded a kick with a non canceling clip
unedited, a sedative seducing the rage, managing it
threatened with a sentence, isn't that tragically sick
what a twisted dimension, a sense of perfection...
this is where insanity lives, the passionate dig as if..
unwrapping a gift, this is where love & vanity kiss
lusting over inanimate shit, the map to sadness & risk
a maze! how elaborate it gets as it shatters when hit
with just enough room where only disaster can sit
matter is split, & janitors give their answers to quit
the same feeling that 'on a silver platter' depicts...
head shots come quicker than the camera can flick
if your manners are shit you'll end up how Saturn is...
I'm erratic, I'm quick, Doc Holiday on a cancerous trip
swifter than a Samurais tip, with a hand on the hip
a standoff with tits but I'm like Gandalf with this
you have the courage I'll need to read that and shit
let's see what you got....Operate an Opera like phantoms exist
you thought my depp was blind and I just randomly miss?
get under the canopy kids and pose like a family pic...
beneath it all where does humanity exist?
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