Copy, is this better?

[Witty]

I'm a shark bite, a tiger poked, a bear in a bar fight, my tier's light years higher than my peers, throwing hard rights, the type of joker even the dark knight fears. I'm bat shit, a little, depressed, stroppy hoe, but when I start to rhyme it's like a match lit, my last shit didn't impress Copy tho :( He was right cuz it was sloppy yo, thank you for your honesty, I know you always got me bro <3 I gotta lay on my side cuz my back's bruised, thinking of getting tattoo's, eating cashews, tryna conceive of black jews...do they exist? i'm not sure so thought i'd ask you, you're tasked to find out the answer and hit me back soon. I honestly don't even try anymore, death been knocking with the scythe at the door, I hung up a sign saying 'out for lunch, brb @ 4' it's self belief I lack, and more, it's the 'kick me' sign that used to be my back, your entire shattered heart then just the piece i cracked, I went online hoping to see life hacks for depression, but it turns out it's just me, I snapped. Stature fractured and then toppled but i'll still fuck your ugly bitch, make the fat in her head wobble, kill her, put her in the sack with the dead model. i'd kick midgets in the head for six digits, fuck i'd do it for two, shit i'd do it for a room with a view, a twix, biscuits, and possibly Swiss triplets, i'll do it with this quickness, try to intervene i'll kick you in the dick, rape you n your bitch, bury you in a ditch, mail your fingers to your family, ruin your kids christmas, that's what you get for screwing with Wit's business. my own man, I don't respect no fads bro, I'm hating kale, I've seen some people making bail, and others go straight to jail, don't collect no cash, don't pass Go.

*had reservations about using 'peers'

*I tried to include the line 'I did a massive fart in Jurassic Park' but how to follow up on it was beyond me :(