Contender Match: Junto 2-0 vs Sn00p 2-0 - sn00p WINS

Razah · 05-18-2015, 04:49 AM

Junto had an okay verse. Like, all the bars were okay, nothing was like, Ahhh that was cool, or whatever.

This is what I liked from Snoop:
^that's ironic. i mean idk if this kid reads news...
but the way u die here... seems like u're doing a BB impression this week too

& to be sure he dies in the dirt, i empty the mag when fighting this nerd
make the whole clip dissappear like no, i don't need help w/ microsoft word

The BB line was kinda bogus, but.. it was a good bar. I dunno why the Microsoft Word line made me laugh. I can actually hear that being said, so that stood out to me.

I dunno, I'm noticing cats having kinda wordy bars with good concepts, but wordy for the sake of making the punch work. I'ma have to go with Snoop

vSnoop

05-18-2015, 04:49 AM	#15
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	Junto had an okay verse. Like, all the bars were okay, nothing was like, Ahhh that was cool, or whatever. This is what I liked from Snoop: ^that's ironic. i mean idk if this kid reads news... but the way u die here... seems like u're doing a BB impression this week too & to be sure he dies in the dirt, i empty the mag when fighting this nerd make the whole clip dissappear like no, i don't need help w/ microsoft word The BB line was kinda bogus, but.. it was a good bar. I dunno why the Microsoft Word line made me laugh. I can actually hear that being said, so that stood out to me. I dunno, I'm noticing cats having kinda wordy bars with good concepts, but wordy for the sake of making the punch work. I'ma have to go with Snoop vSnoop