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CopyPat · 04-09-2015, 07:06 PM

this was different, and fun. your rhyming style is pretty cool and unique. the vocab was very original too but the content was really strange, to a point that it came off as totally random shit. again the rhyming was good but the verse itself was just kinda weird. i did like this though because it was fresh and different. and nothing was predictable. so yeah, made for an entertaining read. would be cool to see u fully commit to a theme of some sort and see what you can come up with. stay posting round these parts broseph

04-09-2015, 07:06 PM	#4
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	this was different, and fun. your rhyming style is pretty cool and unique. the vocab was very original too but the content was really strange, to a point that it came off as totally random shit. again the rhyming was good but the verse itself was just kinda weird. i did like this though because it was fresh and different. and nothing was predictable. so yeah, made for an entertaining read. would be cool to see u fully commit to a theme of some sort and see what you can come up with. stay posting round these parts broseph __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.