BOTW & VOTW

Cereal_Killa · 04-16-2013, 04:19 PM

lol @zenland

votw: redglare
botw: pent vs bent

wow there are 3 ppl in this league that layer there ish more then 2levels deep besides me..

and what i mean by that is hidden easter eggs, so depending on what you pick up in the verse is depending on how you look at the outcome..

this verse has i think 5-6 layers.. he has two.. not one but two stories joining up with one moral outcome.. And the trick with him and these other two writers is to be able to write these layers in without you (the reader) needing to get them, to still understand the meaning of the verse/point they are making..

i know how hard this is to keep clarity my "dream sequence" verse that other week has something like 10+ layers and then i was like oh why didnt anyone get it.. cause i over cooked that chook.. he kept it around 6 and it was a beautiful piece of writing..

so VOTW hands down REDGLARE

well down mate..

04-16-2013, 04:19 PM	#21
Cereal_Killa Licking Lily's.. Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 706 Battle Record: 11-6 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 3565733	lol @zenland votw: redglare botw: pent vs bent wow there are 3 ppl in this league that layer there ish more then 2levels deep besides me.. and what i mean by that is hidden easter eggs, so depending on what you pick up in the verse is depending on how you look at the outcome.. this verse has i think 5-6 layers.. he has two.. not one but two stories joining up with one moral outcome.. And the trick with him and these other two writers is to be able to write these layers in without you (the reader) needing to get them, to still understand the meaning of the verse/point they are making.. i know how hard this is to keep clarity my "dream sequence" verse that other week has something like 10+ layers and then i was like oh why didnt anyone get it.. cause i over cooked that chook.. he kept it around 6 and it was a beautiful piece of writing.. so VOTW hands down REDGLARE well down mate.. __________________ You think YOU'RE sick I shit cough drops .. Last edited by Cereal_Killa; 04-16-2013 at 05:12 PM.