Yo I'm JC (Needs some work)

[J C]

Yo Im JC
Take it from me
Im no wannabe, im a g
Don’t believe me? Youll see
Next time I pass you, I’ll blast you
The po wont even know who shot you
Damn! That’s just how good I am
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Shout out to all my dogs from LA to the Bay
Hey, and all you rivals out there……fck with us and well fck wit you
That’s how it works when you live where we live and do what we do
Its like a zoo, we’re all just animals
O’buncha cannibals. Layin around pickin at our enemy
But it’s just a tendency
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It don’t matta if I’m white
I still bite, till the end of the night, when there’s no one left to fight!
I’m reachin a new height….of rappin skills
It’ll give you a chill and if won’t then my kill will
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I would like some advice, thanks