AOWL Contender Match: [7]Dominate (3-0) vs. [6]dead man (4-2) [dead man wins, 7-1.]

Spoken · 11-16-2014, 11:05 PM

Great battle.. dom u really surprised me with this take. I've seen it done many times before but u kept it str8 and to the point with creative jive and nice cohesion of idea and topic. U had some hhiccups and bumps in the flow but all in all its a great verse. Deadman same old style same old u same old... dead but always on a brilliant plan for his topic u kept it nice and flowed steadily. The content was surprisingly advent with ur style as of late really.... u used somewhat of a different approach than usual but kept it you brotha but nice tack.

Mvgt: Deadman for a more fluent read... I agree sometimes it reads as just random wording and rambles but at the end it all unfolds.... dominate for u brotha u a force that these guys gotta watch out for tbr

11-16-2014, 11:05 PM	#6
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Great battle.. dom u really surprised me with this take. I've seen it done many times before but u kept it str8 and to the point with creative jive and nice cohesion of idea and topic. U had some hhiccups and bumps in the flow but all in all its a great verse. Deadman same old style same old u same old... dead but always on a brilliant plan for his topic u kept it nice and flowed steadily. The content was surprisingly advent with ur style as of late really.... u used somewhat of a different approach than usual but kept it you brotha but nice tack. Mvgt: Deadman for a more fluent read... I agree sometimes it reads as just random wording and rambles but at the end it all unfolds.... dominate for u brotha u a force that these guys gotta watch out for tbr __________________ WP Po'ethics