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H4ZE · 11-15-2014, 02:04 PM

This was pretty sick, had a dope flow, fit for audio imo. Was structured in a cool way, I feel you 100 percent on some of the stuff you said so props on keepin it real. Rhyme schemes were pretty sick throughout. Onlything I would say to work on improving on would be your wording. Imo some of the wording came off as awkward, when a simple rewording would've helped it out, nothing to bad though cuz I really enjoyed this. Good work. Keep at it. Peace.

11-15-2014, 02:04 PM	#4
H4ZE Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Florida Posts: 77 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	This was pretty sick, had a dope flow, fit for audio imo. Was structured in a cool way, I feel you 100 percent on some of the stuff you said so props on keepin it real. Rhyme schemes were pretty sick throughout. Onlything I would say to work on improving on would be your wording. Imo some of the wording came off as awkward, when a simple rewording would've helped it out, nothing to bad though cuz I really enjoyed this. Good work. Keep at it. Peace.