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kickthekan
Join Date: May 2014
Location: fresh coast
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PLACE YOUR BETS
NYC. I love the visual of a "cylindrical metropolis." Well played. But the "smiling sadly... moe smiles" line was, well you know. redundant. My complaint comes soon after Moe dies. Why did Moe die when the cards weren't even done being dealt yet? And why did he fold with Kings? This is gonna be tough, because I used to play poker like 3-4 times a week. And none of these plays make sense to me. It sounds like we've got Lou with 2-2. Moe with kings. and Corey with rockets. And then the flop comes, right? the "awkward ass flop," right? But why did Moe fold with kings? Especially when Corey didn't seem to even have is second card yet. And the flop hadn't even come. There was no betting at that point. Look, this seems like a cool idea, but the execution is confusing as shit to me. This is why I hated that Casino Royale movie. The poker scene was entirely unbelievable. And how would Lou have a 92% chance with deuces over Corey's aces? I just don't get it. And if Lou just CALLED at the end, Corey doesn't get to bet again, so he CANT go all in. :(:(:( Copypat. Seems super rushed. Strangely enough, while rushed, it still had some dope schemes. the manager briefly/package completely, give it away/commission id make lines were dope. and the guy just settling into defeat as he know's his sale is shot was pretty entertaining, "yeah sweet, thats great." closer was a little anti-climactic, but it served its purpose. Definitely entertaining. Against a better verse, this may not hold up, but I have too many quarrels with NYCs verse this week, which gives you an easy leg up. Sorry Spits, the vote is for COPY
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