AOWL Week 8: Aesthetic (0-2) VS. Objective (1-2) [OBJECTIVE WINS, 6-3.]

Frank · 04-08-2013, 10:47 PM

Objective - Simply put; a shell shocker. Easy language that painted a hard time. Very good writing I thought it was. Emotional. You spoke as if you were a member of this horrible family; like a fly on the wall.

Aesthetic - You are a natural story teller. You are a conversationist. This was just a conversation. You were just talking; ocassionally rhyming; but mostly just talking. Could be a new style.

MVGT Objective; depressing battle overall

04-08-2013, 10:47 PM	#13
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Objective - Simply put; a shell shocker. Easy language that painted a hard time. Very good writing I thought it was. Emotional. You spoke as if you were a member of this horrible family; like a fly on the wall. Aesthetic - You are a natural story teller. You are a conversationist. This was just a conversation. You were just talking; ocassionally rhyming; but mostly just talking. Could be a new style. MVGT Objective; depressing battle overall __________________ *VETWORK*