W3: Soulstice (1-0) vs. Witty (1-0) -- Witty 4-2

Mike Wrecka · 10-18-2014, 09:42 PM

On the phone so sorry for the quickie vote

Soul- really impressive writing here. Strong use of vocab on display. Ur rhyme structure is complex but yet also free flowing. Ala frank a bit. Ummm tbh this shit was too abstract for my taste. I honestly don't know what the fuck was going on. Maybe it wasn't abstract. More vague is the right word. Sorry I personally don't wanna have to Sherlock Holmes a verse to understand it. Bhutto ya props on the writing and vocab. Top notch

Witty. - Loved what u did here. I like spinning stories and looking at them from a different perspective. U also made them more gritty. Which was dope. The rhyming and flow was really good and for such a long verse I was never bored. Impressive stuff here

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10-18-2014, 09:42 PM	#5
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	On the phone so sorry for the quickie vote Soul- really impressive writing here. Strong use of vocab on display. Ur rhyme structure is complex but yet also free flowing. Ala frank a bit. Ummm tbh this shit was too abstract for my taste. I honestly don't know what the fuck was going on. Maybe it wasn't abstract. More vague is the right word. Sorry I personally don't wanna have to Sherlock Holmes a verse to understand it. Bhutto ya props on the writing and vocab. Top notch Witty. - Loved what u did here. I like spinning stories and looking at them from a different perspective. U also made them more gritty. Which was dope. The rhyming and flow was really good and for such a long verse I was never bored. Impressive stuff here Vote witty __________________ A.bove T.he R.est