Week 1: Timeless vs. Mr. J [Mr. J wins, 7-2.]

Defiant · 10-06-2014, 04:13 AM

Timeless

Wasn't keen of the verse half of the verse, some of the rhyming was weak and the verse didn't really connect, the second half was dope tho IMO, sound of condoms splitting to the end I liked it.

Mr j

I didn't really like the way you went with this, it started nice, I didn't mind the twist but the verse all together was better. It was more of complete verse

The second half to timeless verse was the best thing in this battle but I think mr j gets for being decent throughout, not just getting started half way through

Vote - mr j

10-06-2014, 04:13 AM	#12
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442247	Timeless Wasn't keen of the verse half of the verse, some of the rhyming was weak and the verse didn't really connect, the second half was dope tho IMO, sound of condoms splitting to the end I liked it. Mr j I didn't really like the way you went with this, it started nice, I didn't mind the twist but the verse all together was better. It was more of complete verse The second half to timeless verse was the best thing in this battle but I think mr j gets for being decent throughout, not just getting started half way through Vote - mr j