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10-05-2014, 11:47 PM
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jilti:
Your opening line wasn't super great, but it set up the second line for dissing him. I loved the Catchwords and Slogan usage. Very creative. Lack of English being correct in "he'll be slogan up" did not dock points, but I'll point it out. Up did not quite rhyme with chump. Score: 8/10 WAG: Your first line was threatening, I guess thats okay. Second line killed it & tied it together. 8.5/10 This one was VERY close. Both had good punch lines and execution. Its hard to vote either way… but: /v WAG
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