R2: Gaseous Snake vs. Wolfdick - [Gaseous Snakes Advances 8-1]

Richard Schwartz · 08-10-2014, 12:31 PM

Gas - I think you know what you've done here... This is a great concept and obviously a lot of work went into your verse. It was impressive. That being said, I thought it was unnecessarily complicated at points and maybe could've had more impact if some of the language was more accessible.

Wolfpeen - this had some cool rhymes and was fun to read but in terms of substance Gaseous snake's verse blows you out of the water. I didn't dislike what you did but it just didn't shine when put next to your opponent's verse. I would've liked some storyline or something.

Vote - Gaseous Snake

08-10-2014, 12:31 PM	#8
Richard Schwartz Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 65 Rep Power: 3707157	Gas - I think you know what you've done here... This is a great concept and obviously a lot of work went into your verse. It was impressive. That being said, I thought it was unnecessarily complicated at points and maybe could've had more impact if some of the language was more accessible. Wolfpeen - this had some cool rhymes and was fun to read but in terms of substance Gaseous snake's verse blows you out of the water. I didn't dislike what you did but it just didn't shine when put next to your opponent's verse. I would've liked some storyline or something. Vote - Gaseous Snake