BB: Untitled FLOW FLATULENCE.

UnbornBuddha · 08-08-2014, 09:40 PM

This was a nice read a bit braggadocio. I assumed that was the point. Nevertheless, you have a very unique way of playing with words. Your name truly fits you. Your like a skilled big baby playing with the whole facet of the English language. It is quite entertaining I might add. Although sometimes you do fashion statements that are a bit eccentric, they still have an impact. I do notice you switch themes quite abruptly, and it's a bit distasteful, and jumbled up. But again, you did name the title "Flow Flatulence" so perhaps you did want to write in a dispersing kind of way.
The way you write reminds of the circus, and I mean that in the best way possible. I personally love the circus. It is entertaining, and riveting.
But admittingly, it is a place of utter disregard to all order. It is a place where almost anything goes. One can perform their craft, or look freakishly asymmetrical and one will get applause, and even an encore for it. It is a place of magic, but also one where accidents can happen. This is where you stumble on words, and do abrupt switches of the theme that is distracting, and never really goes anywhere. I don't know if you always write in such way, I assume not considering I've only read two pieces from you. I do wish to read more, and learn more actually. But perhaps a more serious piece that you pour your heart into.
Anyways I hope you write more.

08-08-2014, 09:40 PM	#13
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	This was a nice read a bit braggadocio. I assumed that was the point. Nevertheless, you have a very unique way of playing with words. Your name truly fits you. Your like a skilled big baby playing with the whole facet of the English language. It is quite entertaining I might add. Although sometimes you do fashion statements that are a bit eccentric, they still have an impact. I do notice you switch themes quite abruptly, and it's a bit distasteful, and jumbled up. But again, you did name the title "Flow Flatulence" so perhaps you did want to write in a dispersing kind of way. The way you write reminds of the circus, and I mean that in the best way possible. I personally love the circus. It is entertaining, and riveting. But admittingly, it is a place of utter disregard to all order. It is a place where almost anything goes. One can perform their craft, or look freakishly asymmetrical and one will get applause, and even an encore for it. It is a place of magic, but also one where accidents can happen. This is where you stumble on words, and do abrupt switches of the theme that is distracting, and never really goes anywhere. I don't know if you always write in such way, I assume not considering I've only read two pieces from you. I do wish to read more, and learn more actually. But perhaps a more serious piece that you pour your heart into. Anyways I hope you write more.