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08-06-2014, 02:28 AM
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ghost in the matrix
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I got roar taking this pretty easily with a clever bar straight to the point an easy flow. Had the. Lol factor
Bishop try shortening the lines just a bit to make it more compact it'll help the overall effectiveness
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