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07-30-2014, 03:45 PM
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putting oomph to your tracks
i been workin on this track for almost a week now and the lyrics are good. i got my emotions right in it too, probly the best i've ever done from what you've heard from me in the past.
i dont have a chorus and even though it's lyrically there, i'm still not happy nor impressed with it. it's missing something. something that'll give it excitement. any suggestions?
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