Camp Bell vs. Vividlyvague [Camp Bell WINS]

King Ra. · 07-23-2014, 11:42 PM

Camp bell, you had an okay bar. The set up was alright. I did like the Vegas/bright play, but did feel it could have hit harder if you were a bit more creative with the punch. Plus scripts tempting/sin city is off rhyme wise a bit. Vivid, the jew/nazi wordplay is definitely dated. I think you should have went another direction going off the 'concentration camp' build up, which probably would have iced it for you because the direction you chose was cliche with the wordplay but a good attempt nonetheless. Got Camp on this one.

MVGT: Camp bell. Good job by both competitors.

07-23-2014, 11:42 PM	#8
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Camp bell, you had an okay bar. The set up was alright. I did like the Vegas/bright play, but did feel it could have hit harder if you were a bit more creative with the punch. Plus scripts tempting/sin city is off rhyme wise a bit. Vivid, the jew/nazi wordplay is definitely dated. I think you should have went another direction going off the 'concentration camp' build up, which probably would have iced it for you because the direction you chose was cliche with the wordplay but a good attempt nonetheless. Got Camp on this one. MVGT: Camp bell. Good job by both competitors. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.