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ribbit · 07-23-2014, 07:47 AM

Dont know wasnt feeling it i guess the way u wrote it it deffo felt more like a cypher flo verse just wasnt clean enuff for an open mic it wasnt well thot out and it needed to be edited to fuck to standout as an outstanding verse there were parts where the flow felt dope but it lacked substance and it didnt captivate me as the reader still like u said it was meant for cypher section so i would love to c u post somdthing uve had more time to put effort and thot into it

07-23-2014, 07:47 AM	#4
ribbit The deputy of nc Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: The Rodent Kingdom Posts: 514 Battle Record: 1-10 Rep Power: 7784053	Dont know wasnt feeling it i guess the way u wrote it it deffo felt more like a cypher flo verse just wasnt clean enuff for an open mic it wasnt well thot out and it needed to be edited to fuck to standout as an outstanding verse there were parts where the flow felt dope but it lacked substance and it didnt captivate me as the reader still like u said it was meant for cypher section so i would love to c u post somdthing uve had more time to put effort and thot into it