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Old 07-23-2014, 02:07 AM   #1
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Default i'm A Better Writer In My Mind Than i Am On Paper

If i write towards perfection, does it make me naive?
Because i strive for you to intercept intentions i sow?

That end rhyme you're looking for -- irreverant. free.
It sits so well, like a memory
see?

You're remembering now. Re-membered in me.
Meaning we are one, re-embering our chest in decrees.
Announced nouns. Reverbiated verbiage. Permeate
pearly gates. It all serves a purpose to me.

Soo fulfilling. Complete. Feeling my ability peak.
You feeling my feelings. An appealing deceit.
Concealing defeat with subtle sounds. Silly. Succinct;

(Guess I could've used "brief" but that syllable stinks)

Guess I could've used meaning but simplicity's cheap
Because the simple things in life leave no mystery..
..meek?
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