what do yall think

Geno · 07-11-2014, 01:48 PM

cool. i get that you liketo rhyme. thats great. but something in the material is lacking

you really need to focuss on more concepts

also. like i said. i need to see you responding to other peoples shit really soon or im gonna be closing your threads until you do. make it happen. i will leave these open for now cause your new and obviously need some feedback to get better but you need to do the same. im not gonna come into everyone of your threads saying it anymore. im just gonna start closing your shit. so do it

07-11-2014, 01:48 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	cool. i get that you liketo rhyme. thats great. but something in the material is lacking you really need to focuss on more concepts also. like i said. i need to see you responding to other peoples shit really soon or im gonna be closing your threads until you do. make it happen. i will leave these open for now cause your new and obviously need some feedback to get better but you need to do the same. im not gonna come into everyone of your threads saying it anymore. im just gonna start closing your shit. so do it __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*