The Rising Of Tarsis

ROUKE · 06-28-2014, 05:09 PM

Very enjoyable read. I liked how original the theme was and the story telling was on point. Nice diction & multi-syllable rhymes as well. It really made the story come alive.

With wrath as our force - we blast through the door of the castle where guards are armed for attack
Yet my army is fast - at barraging a task - so we spark up a blast turning their armored squadron to scrap

^^
Very nice

06-28-2014, 05:09 PM	#3
ROUKE Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 25 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	Very enjoyable read. I liked how original the theme was and the story telling was on point. Nice diction & multi-syllable rhymes as well. It really made the story come alive. With wrath as our force - we blast through the door of the castle where guards are armed for attack Yet my army is fast - at barraging a task - so we spark up a blast turning their armored squadron to scrap ^^ Very nice