Week 10: 7. Vulgar (4-1) vs. 8. Split Eight (1-2) \\ Split Eight wins 4-3

Just Write · 05-03-2014, 12:57 AM

Woah. This was awesome

Split, a very very descriptive narration of what seems to me is a man obsessing over a girl but he's too afraid to act of the feelings? At least thats what I got from it. The wording choice in this is what was a stand out for me, very refined and sophisticated if you will. I enjoyed this piece quite a bit actually.

Vulgar, i really like the fact that you made this a little more reader friendly as far as content, wording, and references. Sometimes I have no idea what you are talking about and it just makes me not want to read it but this was just a great reader friendly story. Still technically sound but I fould more enjoyment out of it because it left me satisfied after reading it, my only gripe is that I wish it was a little longer.

This was a really hard decision. Both of you know what you're doing and kill it in your own styles so honestly i'm going to pick a winner solely on which one I enjoyed MORE and thats vulgar.

Mvgt=Vulgar

05-03-2014, 12:57 AM	#5
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	Woah. This was awesome Split, a very very descriptive narration of what seems to me is a man obsessing over a girl but he's too afraid to act of the feelings? At least thats what I got from it. The wording choice in this is what was a stand out for me, very refined and sophisticated if you will. I enjoyed this piece quite a bit actually. Vulgar, i really like the fact that you made this a little more reader friendly as far as content, wording, and references. Sometimes I have no idea what you are talking about and it just makes me not want to read it but this was just a great reader friendly story. Still technically sound but I fould more enjoyment out of it because it left me satisfied after reading it, my only gripe is that I wish it was a little longer. This was a really hard decision. Both of you know what you're doing and kill it in your own styles so honestly i'm going to pick a winner solely on which one I enjoyed MORE and thats vulgar. Mvgt=Vulgar