Week 9: 7. Johnathan Mercy (1-0) vs. 8. Zombie (1-0) \\ Zombie wins 6-4

Adonis · 04-28-2014, 12:48 AM

This was a fun battle. Both similar, both a bit gruesome which I enjoyed. There were wording issues with both, the lay outs of sentence breaks and shit if you get that. Well I liked john's overall message, zombie had the more enjoyable verse even if he was scatter brain toward the end as well as maybe a bit too lengthy and not changing the tone or violence. So on one hand I have a verse written decent with a better use meaningful message vs. Vivid imagery of death over and over and over again. Cool and fine, I love gruesome imagery and think it's under utilized, but it was sort of droned out after first 40 lines.

Vote john. Close as fuck

04-28-2014, 12:48 AM	#9
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	This was a fun battle. Both similar, both a bit gruesome which I enjoyed. There were wording issues with both, the lay outs of sentence breaks and shit if you get that. Well I liked john's overall message, zombie had the more enjoyable verse even if he was scatter brain toward the end as well as maybe a bit too lengthy and not changing the tone or violence. So on one hand I have a verse written decent with a better use meaningful message vs. Vivid imagery of death over and over and over again. Cool and fine, I love gruesome imagery and think it's under utilized, but it was sort of droned out after first 40 lines. Vote john. Close as fuck __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR