[Might use this in a battle] Critique?

[Aqwafina]

I make a living off serving cats in murderous raps/
My mouth twitches in a nervous act and most spitters leave without their nerves intact/
Infact my trigger fingers been itchy, I've been scratchin like a smack fiend/
I was with your chick last night, but you won't know if the top dropped like inceptions last scene/
She said it's ironic how your jealous, but ain't ever gettin' green/
Let's be honest dawgs, these cats are in what pedigree?/
My squad will monitor you, that means with gats they leave flats screened/flatscreen just for an L, see these?/LCD
Fuck it, dissing me and you're acting sac religious, that's a dick that follows a path of fiction/
If what your selling is realness then that's bad for business, I'm as dope as Whitney Houston's past affliction with crack addiction/
Don't have to act hard, travel in fast cars, or have bad credit and maxed cards/
I'll just say you push too much weight you must slim/Muslim down or crash hard/
might find where the plain/plane terror is/Terrorist, to win tower/Twin Tower and blow up now that's an alluhakBAR!/