Week 7: Certain (0-0) vs. rhetoric (0-0) \\ Certain wins 5-3

[Brian Bryan]

@rhetoric you seem to have a good grasp of storytelling, nice pacing, a good writers voice and the drunken text message showed me you've a humourous edge to you as well, which could serve you well in this league as there aren't many of you around. I think what you lack in the technical aspects you make up for in your storytelling strengths. You're a good addition to the league. You remind me of Saila, truth be told, take that how you will...

@Certain had a polished piece here, the guy is well honed in his craft and he takes a lot of beating, I thought you hated when I did this originally, Certain?!

We will escape, my comrades. This repressive regime
is not the end of the sea. There's more than empty disease.

with the whole broken sentence in line one thing!?

LOL

I see you.

Overall I just felt Certain had a more rounded technical display to his writing, concept and execution than rhetoric here. Certain gets my vote.