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Join Date: Oct 2001
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Mac, good shit son. You elevated. Everbody is talking about the ''wind line''. Oh it didn't rhyme, causing a controversy because the line looks like it's supposed to rhyme. The words look like they are supposed to rhyme. W-I-N-D. M-I-N-D. The word WIND looks at itself in the mirror and sees MIND. They are ying and yang. Polar opposites. Line really had me boggled. But I chalked it up to brilliance. You had a raw way with words eg; be concluded, most importants. I liked this verse. Even though people may not cause they some TION haters. Good shit dun. No more leeway for you. Patrown... You may be the best voter in the AOWL at the moment. I am impressed with how genuine and insightful and articulate your responses have been thus far. You truly are an amazing voter. This week you showed the world you can write as well. I heard somebody say I was laid back this week, whoever that was needs to read your shit. It;s mellow. I thought your verse had a soft pallet that was similar to the 3rd dimension. This is BOTW. Vote to Mac.
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