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03-30-2014, 05:22 PM
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As others have mentioned this was abit different from what I've read from you before. The story was cool nevertheless. Didn't know what to expect and it kept me on the edge from start to finnish. Definitely liked the ending, kinda feeling an ''to be continued...'' after reading it through and I'd like a part 2 to see where Yehuda is headed in life and what he does with his training, haha. Dope shit Vulgar.
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