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03-03-2014, 06:26 PM
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Arm the Homeless
Join Date: Jan 2013
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You don't mind constructive criticism? I don't believe you.
I picked one line that stood out as being off and pointed it out to you. Thats called constructive criticism. It's not my work to improve on which is why I don't give half a fuck if you agree with what I said about it. Btw I lol'd at That's what I would have said. Don't know why. Probably because I'm stoned :/ |
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